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Copperman ~ Collaborative Poetical Works

Doggybag of The Flipside has produced four feedback poems based on discussion thread titles at TheFlipside and AKpCEP.

| Flipside : Iteration 1
| Flipside : Iteration 2

Flipside : Feedback Iteration 2

You have taken a ruler, and tumble through the internet that I FUCK! No!
Is it?. featureless ruler?
With every line. You – and the tears. Student after class and you really have it, talk... heh?
That green carpet. They are all hope (ye who enter here), and if you wish you pretend to a monster?
About italy. it matters?
Didn't originally, but they would pay payments? Does that mean other people without substance?. be smart?
Have more room in some emotional frailties. I used to think of breakfast yet. You must be taken for granted in my your existence?
In their intentions? It craves the circus and it will attract a treat anymore. any value?
We need to know if you were a window.... and this was lost in the back Good job!




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